Quick writing

Creatures wander around the bushes. Cold breeze around the trees. A long path led to nowhere.  A young lady name Sarah lost and confused about how she got lost through the woodland. She started a fire because she was scared. She starved for food and wanted water. 

WALT: Practise quick writing. Today in room 3 literacy class, Whaea Kelly asked us to do some quick writing without a "I" in it. That mean's no I in a single word when your writing. Actually this is how far I got.